Criminally Yours

IT WAS SO GOOD. i loveeee the voice acting, the plot, the characters. wow. one of my favs i can't wait for part two!!!!

when i tell you i am FERAL FOR THIS STORY/GAME?? this visual novel is so great, the art, the stellar voice acting, the dialogue, everything. i absolutely cannot wait until part two. i would pay hundreds to play this game if i had to, seriously amazing <3

I NEED MORE!! PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU! BLESS US 🙏🏽 I NEED A PART 2 TO CONTINUE. In other words, this was amazing, I loved it. Please give us more, you CANNOT leave us like this..This is practically edging :(

I LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTT!! IT WAS SO GOOD OMGGG i would love if we have more scenes of cronos :DD

GOOD LAWD, I KNEW HIS ASS WAS CHRONOS JS FROM THE DESCRIPTIONS BEFORE DOWNLOADING BUT JESUS IT STILL HAD ME FOAMING.... the last scene had me crawling ... #release more

This is perfect, I LOVED the comic book style. I am trying to find different kinds of otome games and this was like a fresh air to me. The cliffhanger is written good, especially the ending monologue of Nik made my jaw drop. I can't wait for the second part <3

This was incredibly well made! Ya’ll really know how to hook someone. The storyline so far is amazing, I loved the designs in-game, the voice acting was phenomenal, and the cliffhanger immediately drew me into wanting more. You did a wonderful job, and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for the next update. ;]

Wow. That was incredible. Can't wait for part two!

i was a bit hesitant to play at first bcs superheros arent really my favourite but DAMN WAS THIS GOOD. keeping an eye on this asf

I really enjoyed this game! I loved the music and the art direction with the pop art/ comic style. The voice acting was also well done, although sometimes I felt like Nik could've had more inflections, but nothing major.

I only have 3 in-depth critiques on things I feel need to be worked on:

So first, I know MC was in a state of panic so they weren't thinking straight, but as someone who is always in the line of danger, they should be calmer than most. So when the MC's mom was attacked, MC should've been suspicious as to how Nik knew that person being attacked was MC's mom when he had never met her, and how he seemingly knew where their apartment was.

Second, I found it odd how MC leaves their mom who has health issues and was just attacked, in their apartment alone in favor of having time with Nik. Knowing how much MC worries about their mom, this was out of character. They should've stayed behind and gently refused Nik's invite to his home, and rescheduled for it. 

Thirdly, I wish we were able to choose to drink or not. I'm not someone who drinks and choose not to drink out of health concerns, so I don't like having to drink in a story that I'm trying to immerse myself in as me. This is just my preference though so you can ignore this.  

Overall I enjoyed the story and idea and can't wait to see more! :)

i loved it i loved it i loved it. Oh dear god, iam so happy to know that this will have a part two, iam so exited!!! MC feels real, i was afraid we would get a mary-sue with the super hero theme but NOPE, and boi Nik is just JHKFFGH! So hyped for more, thank  u for this gem! 

I LOVE HIM WHYYYYY HES A CUTIE IDC IF HES THE VILLAIN

The protagonist is SO BAD AT ACTING NORMAL IT'S FRUSTATING. Made you wonder HOW they're able to have a normal life with how they're at explaining why they need to break up with someone, "oh I have great responsibilities", "oh what I am doing is really dangerous" BRO JUST SAY THAT YOU AREN'T READY FOR A RELATIONSHIP!

idk if the protagonist is intentionally corny or what... made me stop playing the game

i did kind enjoy game

I was super invested in this game and the voice acting was really good! I hope we can find out what happens to our protag x villain couple in Part 2 (is it bad that I still want to date the villain anyway :'D)

Yay full voice acting!!! Amazing game and writing already, Chronos is so unhinged, love him hehe and additionally having a great VA performance was cherry on top, can't wait for August :3

this was amazing! im so excited for part 2!

bro i made an acc on here to comment on this specifically, i am being so fr rn this is the PEAKKKESSSTTTTT GAME THING WHATEVER. like i dont play thaattt many and ive only recently gotten into visual novels or wtv but this is acc sososoososo good im gonna kms PLEASE I NEED THE NEXT PART AHSHSHFSJFAJ

While I was excited for ALL the submissions of the YanJam, this one made me squeal, because I ADORE superhero comic visuals/aesthetics and this just blew my expectations even MOREEEE I LOVE IT SO MUCH

I was a bit surprised with there being actual voice acting but can't say I didn't like it. The whole experience honestly was such a wonderful vibe, AND THE YANDERE ASPECTS JUST KEEPS ON GIVING

SO CURIOUS OF SO MANY THINGS, IM EXCITED

I squealed at around the end when Nik was calling MC a desperate, scared lil' thing, kicking my legs and giggling

I was skeptical, hesitant about downloading a super hero VN, but I did and I do not regret at all

I love it and I can't wait for the part 2 ! and Nikolaos omgg

and I love the UI it's very nice ! it really changes from usual visual novels

The game is genuinely amazing, interesting and unique plot, immersive writing style, loveable characters, but i don't think a visual novel has ever frustrated me more. I had many questions, and none of them were answered 😭. Nevertheless, anxiously looking forward to the second game!!

This was such a fun and amazing experience. Just read there's a part 2 later this year and I'm so looking forward to it!

Love him. Love Chronos. Love Nik. Like genuinely this is the first yandere game that really made giggle and kick my feet.

This is wonderful!! The way I hollered in the beginning. I love it! The UI, the music, the comic graphics, the narrative. I absolutely adore it!

that was VERY, VERY VERY GOOD!! love this theme, plot and characters soo much. Can't wait for pt2!

THAT WAS SO GOOD!! That ending has me in a chokehold and I will eagerly anticipate the next part >:DD I love love this sort of character dynamic and you executed it amazingly! The characters feel so layered, and given their own circumstances are portrayed really well! (I love the mom)

I need to also add that the cell-shaded comic-like art style paired with the subtle screentoned texture is suuuper nice, stylistically this looks AMAZING.

I really liked the contrast between Chronos and Nikolaos, and it was so fun to witness his two personas exist as paralells and then eventually start to converge as the truth/reality sets in for MC. 😆😆😆 The tension was crazy in those final scenes. I was so immersed that when my piece of shit laptop suddenly blue-screened on me while playing I was like WHYY NOW DAMMIT LMAO. Really good stuff and can’t wait for more!

**SPOILERS**

A blonde yandere...yes, thank you! I like both sides of Chronos' character. A helpful sweet professional that the MC can banter with, and then Chronos' charming cockiness (that I can tolerate). I always enjoy when great voice acting is added. Really amps up the playing experience.

But I don't feel like I can relate to the MC because they're a little too "moral" for me, and I would not have left after finding out Nik's identity. I'd do another round with the "enemy"...heheheh. Though I understand that there is an emphasis on hero vs villain..and it does make a good cliffhanger for part 2. 

THE CLIFFHANGER NOOO NONONO I LOVE NIK SO MUCH. MY SCRUMPTIOUS POOKIE BEAR I WILL DIE ON THIS HILL FOR HIM. I NEED HIM SO BAD. WILL BE CHEERING FOR A HAPPY END!!

The plot and the characters' personalities are well written scrumptious or how you write that. Got me hooked fr, I expected more dialouge options tho-- still highly nice either way.

Yandere hero/villain is my tea, the demo definitely got me hooked

I love the dynamic between the player character and the two different sides of the LI <3 excited to see what lies for the second part in august
Remember to take breaks and stay hydrated! :D Thank you for creating this game and bringing me along with many others much joy!

I LOVED IT WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

BRO WHY THE ClIFFHANGERRRR

i'm letting you know this singlehandedly made me create an account just to tell you how peak this is, holy

Very cool game!! loved it all, the soundstrack, MC and Nik/Chronos are super nicely written characters, nice work to all!! 

Excited to future updates!!